Well done, there is evidence here of thorough and in some cases technical analysis. You are using the blog collaboratively, commenting on each other's contributions, however there are gaps. There is no real record of your own concept development which is absolutely vital - any conversations on plot, genre, location should be recorded. Simon/ Timo you are also missing the technical analysis which is now overdue.

Jack - your work is paticularly detailed and thoughtful - at a low L4.

Simon, you too have produced some interesting research - 3/4

Timo, some interesting comments, but your research is not detailed enough - high L3